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tom and jerrys adventure

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Tom and Jerry's adventure 

 

 

We are going to write a joint story.

Adam will write in red

Darren will write in blue

 

 

   Once upon a time there was a teenage boy called Tom. He had blonde short hair with spikes and red evil eyes he had ragedy clothes and a top with flames running down it.He thought he was the last person in the world but then on the hill he saw a girl so Tom ran as fast as he could to get to her.When he reached her he said, "who are you."She said my name is Jerry."Jerry has long black hair with glittering pink eyes she had a long pink skirt with lovely roses on it.They both went to Tom's house and Jerry told Tom that she new a great place to go, "do you want to come with me "said Jerry"il think about it said tom.Then Tom finally decided, Tom said "ok then."Tom started to pack and when he was packing he took a knife from what was his kitchen and put it in his bag.

 

 They set off to go to this place and on the way they had to go down a drain into the sewers.They walked through the sewers for an hour.Half way their said Jerry was sick.Tom said to her "Are you ok?" "yes" Jerry said im fine.so they set of.they eventualy got to the other drain and they popped heads up the drain.It was a forest they got up out of the drain.They seen a giant house about 2 miles away.They set off through the forest.Then Jerry said "i think i cought a disese."tom said "don't worry you'll be fine."so they set of again.they were half way through the forest then they see lots of bears.tom said "be quit or they'll see us and chase us."so they ran qietly to the house and ran inside.Then jerry collapsed,dont leave me with tears in his eyes she died.

 

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              Adam L & Darren m

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